高考范文

以下是2011高考教育局给出的高考范文，它的格式和句型就是我们要追求的目标。与其用很复杂的中文或者英文来解释，好的老师应该能用简单的话，解释文章的结构。

以下是典型的expository文章的开头段的结构：这事高考英文第一部分的文章（text response）

1.The film, ‘On the Waterfront’ directed by Elia Kazan is a story of
Terry Malloy who was a former prize-fighter but his life was ruined
after Johnny Friendly ‘bought a piece’ of him. 背景介绍句。这本书或者电影讲了什么！

2.However, the film tells the transformation of Terry from a failed
boxer to a hero (过度，链接题目)

3.who is admired and respected by his actions through his own awakened
conscience. 第一个topic sentence

4.Also, Edie’s innocence and faith in him, alongside Father Barry’s
sermon on the dock start to give a sense of justice.第二个topic sentence

5.And Terry’s beloved brother, Charley’s death was the final catalyst
to lead Terry to be a hero who is the first person to stand up against
the corruption. 第三个topic sentence

五个得分点，150个字，完美的开头！